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Baahah. FAIL.
But look look!
NO LINES!
*le gasp!*
I'M CRITIQUE HUNGRAY! @w@
Feed, Pwease?

I spent A LOT time on this....
bleh...

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:iconsasoridanna94:
Holy GAWD!!
You just knock me away with every pic you submit. :wow:
The only critiques I can give is that near the chin, it seems to narrow a little too much.
And that since there are glowing things, it should probably reflect in the eyes.
And since it's glowing, maybe put a really light color ( almost white ) at the center of the shape. ^^

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:iconsalice-is-an-idiot:
flip if horizontally if you want to see the mistakes :heart:

I enjoy the soft coloring on the face and the hair. I believe you should consider color more carefully. how would the orange lights affect someone IRL? They'd bounce off different areas of the light and skin, coloring it.

in the end, you should strive for a sense of color unity. It's really hard, I still suck at it, but it's one of the most important aspects of art. Instead of randomly picking colors, consider carefully how they look together. Look at good pictures and see what color palets the you and how the color interacts with eachother.


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:icondivinity-wolf:
Wow, thanks a ton.
I'll keep all that in mind the next time. :heart:
It was hard enough this round for me to go with no lines. xD
Yay, i took a big girl step.
I need to work on anatomy as well.
Thankyooouuu! ^^
:icondivinity-wolf:
xD
Thankyou a lot.
Yeah... i figured her chin was too long/narrow...
and i wasn't thinking of how the light would reflect in the eyes....
I'll no doubt, end up doing some revision on this.
You're art is looking pretty swell, too!! ^-^
:iconnightingowl:
I like the lighting and the eyes. They look very nice [:

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:iconniimura-chan:
WOW.
This turned out so beautiful!!
I love her nose. x3
Its just so cute, and pink and adorable. xD
Everyone else said such good critiques, and I cant think of anything that you could change to make it looks better, that someone else has already said. Sorry DD":

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:icondivinity-wolf:
Eheh. Thankyou so much. xD
I understand.. haha they beat you to it.
Thankyou for the nice comment though. :heart:
:iconyasumeru:
I think this looks amazing, it's really cool! I can't do lineless Dx *always makes it look awkward*. I like that glow effect too :'D

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:icondivinity-wolf:
Well, thankyou!
Yeah, this is my first time doing lineless on a human... i've done animals and stuff...
but yeah.
Thankyou once again. xD

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